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PostSubject: Suna To Konoha   Fri Sep 25, 2015 5:45 am

Having Seen everything in the bijuu attacks Satsujin would pack his bags and continue his journey as a rouge nin. He wanted to see somewhere else and he never been to village hidden in leaves so he decided that would be a nice stop for him in his adventures.
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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Fri Sep 25, 2015 6:28 am

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"How strange." Ume would say as he would spot a figure just walking, also, within this desert. A complete coincidence. The distance between the two of them was no more than thirty meters, Ume heading in the direction of the village while the strange heading from it. A bit of backstory is that Ume was out here looking for the Bijuu, finding it extremely strange that they had vanished. And his thinking was that there should be some type of clue out there that would put in on the path to finding them. Sadly, he was no doing so well on this quest. Well until he saw this person walking from the village.

It was, honestly, very strange and suspicious. Yes, it shouldn't be weird for someone to be traveling away from the village, many people did that. But no one should be traveling right after the Bijuu attack, well in Ume's mind no one should. He thought that people were, currently, trying to make sure everyone was okay, check if there were any survivors from the arena, and or calm people down fromt eh attack. But a lone suspicious looking person walking seemed out of place, well from Ume's point of view.

But maybe Ume was wrong. "Hault, why are you leaving the village? Or well coming from that direction?" Would be the two simple question he would ask the individual, they being reasonable enough. Ume spoke loud enough so that the individual could hear him even with their thirty meter distance, and even walked casually to close the gap. And if the individual didn't stop walking also they also would be closing the gap.

Ume didn't change much of his attire after leaving the fallen gates of the village, but he did have a poncho on and was holding a book in his right hand. This precious book having a seal written within it, well drawn over one already within the black book, when Ume had left for his little quest. ( Topic )

Ume didn't trust the person at all and his guard was up when he first spotted him and would adjust in anyway he deemed fit if a hostile move or ill word would be said.



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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Sun Sep 27, 2015 3:33 pm

In the distance was a shadow slowly getting closer, Satsujin would stop as the figure began to scream towards him. He remembered this voice from the day he was kicked out the village. How could he forget it this was one of the person among the crowd who had spoke that his killings was unjustified. Looking over his body he remembered he forgot to clean himself off so he was still covered in the blood from the dead villagers. "Now Now Why would anyone stay in a place where when you get back you find your family dead and the village in shambles" would be Satsujin response to the person question. He would continue to walk forward his face showing no emotions as he got closer and closer to the person he would stop 15 meters away from the man and hope his lie was good enough to drop any suspicions of him.
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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Sun Sep 27, 2015 8:20 pm

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Once the man would speak and stop advancing forward his words Ume would open the book he held and a bright light would shine outward and, attempt to, light up Satsujin.

The blinding white light came out like a cone, of light, that was ten meters wide, five meters tall and travels for forty meters in the direction the book was facing. Like it usually did the light would travel at it's top speed, and anything that was touched by the light would be consumed. Well, only if the things within it's path couldn't escape it in time.

If successful Ume would close the book as sealing would only take less than a second. "Foolish, why would you even speak. Knowing that I was one of the SHinobi that caused you to be exiled from the Village. Why would you even stay within our lands, you had ample enough time to run. Even here you could have escaped... or at least changed your voice and cleaned that blood off of you."

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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Sun Sep 27, 2015 9:59 pm

Satsujin had feared the most he never knew who sealed him but he was still suspicious of this. His eyes was focus on any slight movement and as soon as the man moved his left hand to open the book. Satsujin would quickly draw his sword moving at a faster speed than the man opening his book. He would quickly slash his throat trying to kill himself instead of being sealed. Blood gushing from his throat he would smirk as the light overcame him.
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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Sun Sep 27, 2015 10:26 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 5:37 pm

The two summons, Lucian and Akihiko, only took a short few seconds from where they were summoned to reach the boy, Ume Uzumaki, stopping their full speed charge about 40 meters to the boy's right. Once the two had reached their destination, they knew exactly what Ryujin's orders were, capture the target alive. The boy stood alone on the desert sand with a puddle of blood laying a few meters in front of the boy, Ume. This was a clear sign that the boy would be their target which Ryujin spoke of, not to mention he was the only person there and stood at the general location Ryujin mentioned. There was no time to waste, the boy's body would have been sealed only a short few seconds ago and who knew what the attacker would do. With the contraction of a few muscles in Lucian's face forming a grin, he would cause a slight manipulation within his own chakra in order to activate his technique. It would happen near instantly as it required no handseals for Lucian to perform the technique, his chakra would start infiltrating the boy's body with the activation of the technique if the boy couldn't protect himself from it. It was a genjutsu, a genjutsu which would cause Ume Uzumaki to loose all mobility he possessed if he got caught in it, rendering him unable to move as his body would stand still in the spot he was, 40 meters in front of Lucian and Akihiko. It was one simple technique that would mean the end of the uzumaki's threat as he wouldn't even be able to talk, the 8ft tall werewolf's technique possessing the ability to take away the target's mobility. The summon's attack didn't end there though as he would take no chances, Ryujin's orders were clear, to capture the target alive and so they would do. Akihiko stood by in case something went wrong and his swordsmanship was needed as samehada laid rest strapped to Akihiko's back, the beast's eyes locked onto his target loosing no focus at all. Immediately after Genjutsu: Binding was used, Lucian would activate yet another genjutsu as his chakra was manipulated through the formation of the tiger handseal, done with his hands before his own body. Through the use of this handseal he would cause the opponent's eyesight to become nonexistent, darkness filling Ume's eyes once the technique would be used. Unless the opponent possessed the ability to fend off genjutsu, there would be no hope for the boy as all of this happened extremely fast, their arrival wouldn't even be noticed because of the speed they were moving at and Ume's focus being elsewhere. Though they took no chances, they wouldn't give in to a win so easily and remained vigilant, their attention remaining on the boy and anything that he might conjure up in order to avoid these two genjutsu techniques or break free from them. They were unaware of their target's name being Ume Uzumaki, though if this Ume were to attempt to gain distance between himself and the two summons they would simply follow with their full speed which would easily trump their targets' speed in order to maintain a 40 meter distance between themselves and ume.
[OOC: shittiest post evur .-. Anyway I'd like a link to where you got that technique approved and graded. Also, since your "placeholder" wasn't edited, consider my post validddddd
Here's my post regarding me summoning them and sending them to ya http://shinobiworldwar.forumotion.com/t1076-team-hokage-goes-viral]


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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 5:53 pm

[ooc: For oen what you just said about my placeholder lol makes completely no sense to me, but w.e Admin. Here is the link to the jutsu that YOUR staff approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 7:40 pm

(OOC: this jutsu will be remoderated due to mishap among staff upon approval)

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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 8:12 pm

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Due to the speed at which the light would travel, added to the distance between the two there would be a sufficient amount of time for the boy's actions to take place, or better put finish completely if he wants to die so bad. He would be able to feel the pain of having his throat slit but the gushing of blood that may have splattered across the sand of this land would not occur, as everything would instantly be transported into the book.

As the light, once it hits it target, seals it immediately.


And that also goes for anything within the reach of the light, whether it being animate or inanimate objects. Ume, once he had saw his light make contact would do something at that very moment, and that would be transport out of the area.

Why? Simply do to that fact he wanted to do something with the boy immediately. As he traveled when he would utter his first words of success to himself, and was about to close the book. And finish his sentence when he was back at the bathhouse he made his very first FTG marks at.

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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 8:19 pm

I'd run if I knew I was going to die too. Using limiteds to flee makes me laugh. But is legitimate no matter how cowardly.

However, as stated by your jutsu, anyone who dies while being sealed leaves no trace. Therefore sastujins body no longer exists.

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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 8:33 pm

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I never cared for you shitty opinion on things. So why yah gotta always say em like they matter, don't answer that, you are annoying. But where does it say those killed and sealed no longer exist, are you making things up? He isn't even dead. Yea, I allowed him to cut his own throat but you don't die instantly from something like that. I can just unseal him and let him bleed out in another topic, like I planned on doing.
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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 8:49 pm

Nah. He's officially dead. Im calling it here. I guess my opinion really does matter.

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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 8:53 pm

OOC: Nah, since he didn't die I can't be dead. :/ But what is logic.
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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:02 pm

Your fuinjutsu doesn't suspend him in time (and actually includes a bit about them still being fully functional within the seal as they are forced to go through trials) or cure his injuries. Therefore he will die immediately upon entering the seal due to blood loss, since he will retain the same bodily state within the seal. Since he died inside the seal he now ceases to exist.

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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:08 pm

ooc: Being turned into a illustration I think can be considered suspending him in time. Only when he undergoes the trials, which I never planned on using, can be considered him not being suspended in time. So when he is unsealed I think he would be in the same state he was sealed in. And where are you getting he would 'cease to exist' from? Nowhere in this jutsu does it say anything about that.
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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:25 pm

ooc: Okay, I guess you can say he is dead. No, he is dying due to cutting his throat. But that doesn't mean he is IMMEDIATELY dead and no longer exist. As I would say only a few seconds have passed and that isn't enough time for him to die so quickly. I still have enough time to unseal him and let him bleed out in another topic, which I plan to do.
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PostSubject: Re: Suna To Konoha   Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:26 pm

It it's kinda funny how suspended in time isn't the same thing as being suspended in an illustration. Anyways, I'm done discussing it. Your lack of wording, or rather itomes in this case, failed you. Don't be too upset as the jutsu will need revisions due to obvious reasons.

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