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PostSubject: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeThu Sep 17, 2015 8:42 pm

Name: Ace Shot
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close (2-3 meters)
Handseals: N/A
Speed: As Fast as User
Description: In the midst of close combat, the user quickens his blood in his designated arm, and launches a speedy punch that is equal to the speed stats of the user. (Depending on Strength Stats, the Possible Harm)
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Name: Sixth Sense
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Supplementary
Handseals: Rabbit - Horse
Speed: [+15 Stat Boost of Strength & Speed]
Description: The sixth sense of the Prodigy, is a technique in which the user focuses & speeds the motion of his blood cells in which he's able to increase their own physical capabilities.
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Name: Autumns Falling
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close Range
Handseals: N/A
Speed: As Fast As User
Description: Autumns Falling, a technique created by Dominick Hideaki in efforts to create a perfect fighting style utilizes the fury of footwork. With a spinning motion he's able to send a variety of kicks into the opponent sending them flying a few meters, in any direction. # of Kicks: 7
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Name: Pulse
Rank:C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close Range
Handseals: N/A
Speed: As Fast As User
Description: Pulse, utilizes the power of it's user. Thrusting an elbow & Fist into the opponent after flanking behind them.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeThu Sep 17, 2015 9:16 pm

All seem well made and aren't overpowered. Approved. I like!

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PostSubject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeFri Sep 18, 2015 11:26 am

Upon further inspection, the following technique is Denied. You may recreate with a different affect if you wish, but as it is, it undermines the Hyuuga Clan's Gentle Fist, so it will not be approved.

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Name: Pulse
Rank:C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close Range
Handseals: N/A
Speed: As Fast As User
Description: Pulse, utilizes the power of it's user. Thrusting an elbow & Fist into the opponent, they temporary block the chakra networks of their opponent until the next the post.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeFri Sep 18, 2015 11:17 pm

Ace shot also denied as there's a hyuuga tech that does this.

Add a Handseal or two for sixth sense

Be more specific with autumn's falling. I don't understand if it's a melee or a projectile. Also what does it have to do with midair combat. If it uses lightning Chakra it has a lightning element. Details
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PostSubject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeSun Sep 20, 2015 4:52 pm

@Ryan If you'd look at the the spoiler, you'd see the visual representation as it shows melee combat.

Edited Please Approve.....
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PostSubject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeSun Sep 20, 2015 5:06 pm

I saw the visual. I still want your wordings to be more descriptive. A single ssentence will generally not be enough. Review Autumn's falling once again. All others are good
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PostSubject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeSun Sep 20, 2015 6:09 pm

Fixed, I have a tried my best a little.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeSun Sep 20, 2015 10:31 pm

How many kicks are in this variety.

Sorry if I'm seeming tough lol. I appreciate your hard work. I just prefer jutsu be specific
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PostSubject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeMon Sep 21, 2015 8:16 am

Updated T^T
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PostSubject: Re: Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance"   Dominick's Taijutsu Style "Autumn Dance" Icon_minitimeMon Sep 21, 2015 7:18 pm

Approved Razz
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