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PostSubject: The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications]   The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications] Icon_minitimeFri Sep 25, 2015 9:09 pm

Name: Senmaioroshi
Rank: A - Rank
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: None
Range: Close, length of the weapon
Handseals: None
Speed: Boosts user by 50 Speed for the duration of the technique
Description: Similar to Iai Beheading and Moonlight, the user will rush towards the target at great speed as nine extremely fast blade movements take place that is capable of shredding a target into pieces before it's even aware what happen. However it can only cut through defenses that only the blade is capable of cutting. It requires Iaido.
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Name: Ryūkansen
Rank: C - Rank
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: None
Range: Sword Length
Handseals: None
Speed: Equal to weapon speed stat
Description: Most often used as a counterattack against a thrust or charge, one sidesteps a forward-moving opponent and moves past them. In doing so, one spins in a full circle, adding momentum and centrifugal force to the strength of the sword swing, which is then aimed at either the opponent's back or the back of the neck. Note  the user will only be able to dodge attacks they're normally capable of dodging.

Name: Ryūtsuisen
Rank: C - Rank
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: None
Range: Sword Length
Handseals: None
Speed: Equal to weapon speed stat
Description:From a position higher than one's opponent (usually initiated by a powerful jump, meaning jumping over attack or from a higher platform like a tree, physically the user can jump nine feet), one uses the momentum of the fall to strengthen a two-handed sword swing that brings the blade down on the opponent's head or shoulder.

Name: Ryūshōsen
Rank: C - Rank
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: None
Range: Sword Length
Handseals: None
Speed: Equal to weapon speed stat
Description: The opposite of Ryūtsuisen, Ryūshōsen is a rising attack meant to strike the jaw from below. For additional power, one uses one's free arm to apply force to the back of the blade and utilizes a powerful upward jump during the attack. Originally this move was designed to slice into the opponent's chin and kill them

Name: Ryūtsuishōsen
Rank: C - Rank
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: None
Range: Sword Length
Handseals: None
Speed: Equal to weapon speed stat
Description: A combination of Ryūtsuisen and Ryūshōsen, Ryūtsuishōsen begins with the powerful jump [nine feet] and supported upswing of Ryūshōsen, giving the leap enough power to pass one's opponent in mid-air, and on the returning drop, Ryūtsuisen is performed.


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PostSubject: Re: The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications]   The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications] Icon_minitimeSun Sep 27, 2015 1:11 am

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PostSubject: Re: The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications]   The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications] Icon_minitimeSun Sep 27, 2015 12:43 pm

There are no instants. Please remove the extra stuff in the speed field and just say +50. Also the range for this tech would be more like "weapon length" or something of that manner since close is relative ya know? Also include how many slashes this does.

Please edit ryukansen to say that the user will only be able to dodge attacks they're normally capable of dodging. This is to prevent you from using this to dodge like every attack that comes your way, aka autododging

Ryutsuisen approved.

For Ryutshoushen specify how high the user is able to jump during this technique.

Again, specify jump height
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PostSubject: Re: The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications]   The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications] Icon_minitimeSun Sep 27, 2015 12:58 pm

Well you need to edit the Bukijutsu Techniques thread because it has an instant, namely Secret Sword: Moonlight "Accelerates user by 20 Speed for an instant". I have no objections with the others and I'll go edit them.
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PostSubject: Re: The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications]   The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications] Icon_minitimeWed Sep 30, 2015 1:12 am

Thank you for spotting that. Sorry for the confusion. Please edit it out of your jutsu though...
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PostSubject: Re: The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications]   The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications] Icon_minitimeThu Oct 01, 2015 11:58 am

It's okay and I edited the Jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications]   The Battlefield of Valhalla [Thorfinn Jutsu Applications] Icon_minitimeThu Oct 01, 2015 7:20 pm

Please edit the "for an instant" out of your first jutsu
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Dang I thought I got that out, pardon me xD. Edited
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Looks good to me. Approved until further notice
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