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PostSubject: Re: Ninjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu (A-Ranks)   Ninjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu (A-Ranks) Icon_minitimeTue Oct 27, 2015 12:24 am

These all need numerical distances or, alternatively, most of them look like they are touch/self, which is fine, but needs to be changed to that. Also I think the fleshy techniques are cool.

  • Flesh Swapping: Does the person you take flesh from also shrink or have something bad happen to them?
  • Advanced Chakra Transfer: Obviously cannot give someone more chakra than they can maximally hold, but otherwise approved.
  • Chakra Absorption: Approved.
  • Self Flesh: Approved.
  • Energy Refueling: Does this work if you're knocked out or just if you collapse from exhaustion?
  • Age Transfusion: Should have a hand seal or something to prep, otherwise approved.
  • Trace Concealment: Approved; S rank sensing abilities will still be able to find you, as will contact sensory abilities.
  • Chakra Display: Approved
  • Mind Sharing: Approved assuming that you can only use this on people that you've given chakra to in that thread (as discussed).
  • Chakra Pinpoint: If I read this correctly, you lock on to one particular chakra source and then pursue them relentlessly with this, bypassing other hiding techniques and such. Is that accurate? If so that's ok, but know that S ranked chakra hiding powers will still make them vanish to you. Also, can you only sense that one chakra presence then? And how does one lock on?
  • Friction Reduction: Does this speed you up or does it speed wind rank techniques up? Or... both? I'm a bit confused by this as it is.
  • Surface Softening: Seems ok. Approved.
  • Clothing Manifestation: Approved. Repairing clothing will require additional chakra, as I'm sure you know.
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PostSubject: Re: Ninjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu (A-Ranks)   Ninjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu (A-Ranks) Icon_minitimeTue Oct 27, 2015 12:59 am


  • Flesh Swapping: What would determine if they die? Should be the last question I think.
  • Energy Refueling: Approved
  • Age Transfusion: Hm... I suppose. I imagine the person can feel something rather painful when they are being robbed. Approved.
  • Mind Sharing: Approved.
  • Chakra Pinpoint: Approved.
  • Friction Reduction: Ah I understand. Needs like two hand seals, then approved.


Also, need the ranges.
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PostSubject: Re: Ninjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu (A-Ranks)   Ninjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu (A-Ranks) Icon_minitimeTue Oct 27, 2015 10:39 pm

Dice roll seems fine to me, age transfusion being tingly also is fine. Just as long as we know how it feels.

The ranges other than touch and self need some kind of numerical max, like 30m or whatever. Then these should be good to go.
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PostSubject: Re: Ninjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu (A-Ranks)   Ninjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu (A-Ranks) Icon_minitimeTue Oct 27, 2015 11:57 pm

Thank you.

Approved
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